She sat there annotating and critiquing almost each and every paragraph whilst I laughed, not at her but at my feeble attempts to convey an important message.
Mysterious girl (dissertation) I want to be close to you
Ok, that was cringy and I apologise.
Originally there would be confusion as to why Ashley couldn’t understand what I was writing even though I felt it was written right there (no a bit to the right.. there we are). However, after sitting in that tutorial I realised that it was my vagueness that was hindering the progression of my dissertation.
Convolution is the disease that is plaguing my writing academia and it needs to be eradicated by using the sword of clarity.